short and sweet
can't complain about it being short, because it loads in no time. very funny and enjoyable.
graphics were smooth and nice looking. the choice of music fit as well. look forward to seeing more.
somebody finally tapped into the comical stylings of jerry clower! good job. can't wait to see more.
nice to see you on newgrounds. i've been a fan of your work and have frequented your bitey castle site for over a year now. unique style, fun mystical stories. can't wait to see what you do next.
not the worst
but definitely not the best either. my only suggestion (other than sending in the completed version) would be to make it a little bit lighter...it's so dark it's hard to really see what's going on.
funny story, great animation. nice distinctive style.
you ripped off the turd of the week from a couple of weeks ago. vote 5...i don't think so.
i love this series!!!
they are all hilarious!!! i caught the easter eggs (added to the humor alot)....but i don't want to spoil them for anybody else. great job! keep them coming!!
..and i don't say that to be an asshole or anything...speed it up a bit, work with your pacing and timing...make the story move faster and throw in some more artwork and/or animation. i wouldn't have voted low if it wasn't so slow...i'm a fair voter, i realize how hard and time consuming it is to make flash films, and i watched the whole thing...but i just felt like it didn't pay off enough to have to watch it that long. i'll look forward to seeing your next entry, now that you have some feedback.
that's the way it is, isn't it? the hell with all the whiny bitches. great job!!!!
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